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Band 5+: Some people think that only purpose of working hard is to earn money

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Some individuals think that the only reason of working hard is to make money. This essay will explain why I probably agree this opinion.

Firstly, people live differen wealthy levels, as result of the way of earn money is differen, such as richer spends more time to research financial market, who earns money by passive income. Therefore, when the market closes, people can do any things by theirsolve. Investers are not really working hard, they just know how to use money to make more money.

On the other hand, some mankinds say that we do not have money first, how we we can invest. However, if we had assigned our wealth or salary, we could invest stock to make more money. Hence, ordinary people need to working hard while accumulating wealth.

In my case, although I do not have job now, but I invest stock by my pocket money every months. This way to earn money is common in my country, since some people think their salary can not buy house or car, and too difficult to live at the rising price of generation, then income is not enough by working, they need to find others way to earn more funds.

To sum up, some people prefer to invest stock to earn passive income. However, we need to have some funds to join financial market, and who knows that which day the stock become to be wealthless, in order to spreading risk, we need to do a good job in asset allocation. Therefore, making money does not have only one way, but working hard is first step in earn money.

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