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Band 5+: Some people think that schools should focus on academic subjects like math and science, while others believe that schools should also include activities such as music, art, and sports. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In today’s modern and rapidly developing world, education plays a crucial role in shaping a better future and nurturing an educated generation. While some individuals argue that schools should prioritise academic subjects such as mathematics and science due to their potential to provide better employment opportunities, others believe that educational programmes should also incorporate active learning through subjects like art, music, and sports, which are valuable for real-life experience and personal development. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own opinion.

On the one hand, adding in school schedule more academic lessons such as math and science. While including this kind of subjects we could influence to developing of country by the reason pupils who teach math could be great specialists of their profession which help to economy of country and raising life standards. For example, students con use their knowledges in different areas which will be beneficial for both sides

On the other hand, if teachers considered students more active learning such as sport and art. It helps to develop real life experience and critical thinking skills which is useful when you face with challenges during the life. Moreover, studying art or music is magic ability which helps to both sides for economical and personal growth due to person who know playing on the guitar or on the other musical instruments can develop their ability and play big role in increasing generation interest in a art or a music which helps them to relax after hard day. For example, students could earn money in their free time by teaching others or after graduation have two works to earning more money to more convenient live. Also having hobbies like sport and art very beneficial to our health.

In conclusion, although academic subjects like mathematics and science are crucial for securing employment and contributing to a nation’s economic progress, incorporating creative and physical activities such as music, art, and sports is equally important for students’ personal development and well-being. In my opinion, a balanced educational approach that includes both academic and non-academic subjects is the most effective way to prepare students for both their professional careers and personal lives.

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