Some people emphasize that success in life is achieved through hard work and determination, while others are opposed to this view. Personally, I agree more with the former opinion.
On the one hand, critics say that hard work and determination can help people to overcome obstacles. Through this, people may live in a happy life without any different problems, including financial and social. Moreover, people think that achievements come from consistent effort and resilience. That’s why people definitely believe that they can change their life to a positive side in the future through these effort.
On the other hand, proponents state that other factors such as luck and opportunities may play a role to achieve success in life. For instance, some people may play gambling games and through this they will bet few money and take money which increased to multifold if they get lucky. Furthermore, some people are born in rich families, accessing to better education and luxury items such as fancy cars, big house and may be a lot of clothes. Again, those who have inherent abilities and skills can achieve success more easily even with less effort. For example, people who excel at any subjects by using these talents may earn a lot of money in their major without hardworking.
In my opinion, while hard work and determination are crucial, I believe that success is often a mix of personal effort and external factors. Nevertheless, hard work and determination maximize the chances to achieve success rather than waiting to get lucky for a long time.
In conclusion, people should more rely on hard work and determination instead of external factors. This is because all people do not have inherent talents and skills.