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Band 6+: Some people think that the success of life is based on hard work and determination. Others, however, believe that there are more important factors, such as having money or a good appearance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many people measure success by the amount of dedication and hard work involved, while others believe that being wealthy or attractive is more significant factor.

On the one hand, money and good looks can influence some part of success as they provide the visual feedback of our thoughts to the world. For instance, according to some psychological studies, if people are good-looking or well-dressed, there are more chances of getting the desired results as they want. The logic behind that, it represents the self-confidence and intention of an individual, especially when it is needed to set the first impression. Similarly, if a person is wealthy, it is likely that they are more confident , which can boost their prospect of being successful in life. However, this cannot be solely true based on appearance because good looks entierly cannot make a person accomplished without any dedication.

On the other hand, dedication and hard work are necessary aspects to live a successful life. Because if a person is not focused on their dreams, there are more chances of failure. For instance, Steve Jobs started his vision of making Apple, the best tech brand, from his basement because of his poor financial background. However, he achieved his dream because he was determent to make into a reality regardless of his living conditions. In one of his interviews, Steve mentioned of working almost eleven hours a day with minimal breaks. This indicates hard work and perseverance are necessary to achieve glory in life.

To conclude, living an accomplished life involves focus and diligence regardless of pleasant appearance or lots of money. Thus, I firmly believe that no amount of money or beauty can overcome the purposeful and dedicated life that can fullfill the dreams.

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