🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Opinion

Band 4+: Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

Certain people say that art-related subjects are crucial as the others, especially at primary stage. This essay strongly disagree with the main topic because music is not like the main subject such as math, physics, etc that can be use in any condition in daily life and some of children are not keen on the art.

First and foremost, music is not too important as primary subject, especially by who not have interest in this subject. Moreover, not everyone can play and listen to it, this is also same with sports, everybody can choose base on their hobbies. Some people who support this agrument comparing it to the mathemathics that can be use in any condition. For instance, in trading, doing a simple calculation while buying and selling some goods, and anythings are related to math (computer, electricity, finance, etc), it can not be replace. However, music can be replace with another subjects.

Furthermore, probably there is many of teenagers that have different hobbies. If the students would pushed to do something that they do not really into, it might cause a stress condition, and make they do not enjoy their schools life. For example, in some Padang city high schools, who not separate this subject as secondary, make of some students become confusing because they do not really understand and not like to do some activity that related in drama or musics art.

In conclusion, it seems to me that music, art and drama are not too important as the others, since it depends on the children interest and how it use in daily situation.

Word Count: 266

Essays On The Same Topic:

Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

The proposition that School subjects such art, music and drama for student in entry level are not necessary as math and science subjects is a matter of considerable debate. I completely disagree with this statement beacuse art subjects is helping student dealing with new feeling and improve creative thinking skills. The main reason I disagree […]

Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion, I agree that music, art and drama is as important as school subjects, specially at primary level. First, children at primary school is very young. They not like only read and write all day. Music and art help they to be happy and creative. For example, when child draw picture or sing […]

Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

It is claimed by some people that music, art and drama are as vital as other school subjects, especially at the primary school. I strongly agree with this viewpoint because music, art and drama improve cognitive skills as well as help pupils to think outside the box and also relief their stress. Firstly, music, art […]

Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that arts-related subjects are as important as other school subjects, especially for primary school children. I totally agree with this statement because this can help children to discover their talents from an early age and can increase their confidence. One of the reasons I agree that creative subjects have the same importance […]

See All

Other Topics:

In many countries, there is a growing trend of people choosing to live in urban areas rather than rural areas. Some believe this leads to various problems, while others argue it provides better opportunities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People migrating from rural areas to large cities to have better opportunities has become a trend in many different countries. Some people believe this can bring benefits to the national economic growth, while others are worried about the city infrastructure and negative impacts on rural communities. I believe that internal migration can deeply benefit the […]

Some people think that it is fine for professional sports persons to misbehave on or off he field so long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree?

For some people, the behaviour of good sportsmen and sportswomen is not important when they are not performing in front of a crowd. To this extent, I believe that a famous sportsperson needs to show a good attitude on and off the pitch, but I also agree that athletes should not feel followed and live […]

Some people think that it is fine for professional sports persons to misbehave on or off he field so long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree?

For some people behavior of good sportsmen and sportswomen are not important when they are not performing in front of crowd. To this extend, I believe that a famous sportsperson need to show a good attitude on and off the pitch, but I also agree that sportsperson should not feel followed and live peacefully. In […]

Some people think that teenagers should do some unpaid work in the local community. Some people believe that it benefit both young people and society as a whole. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In modernized societies there is general tendency toward fostering juveniles to participate in works and initiatives for free ,therefore this inclination has become a general contention recently , while many individuals endorse this phenomena believing its has many upsides for society as well as participants them self others support it as long as its be […]

Many people prefer to use public transportation while others say that personal cars are the best mode of transportation. Excessive use of private cars is considered to be the main reason for the traffic jam in many cities and that's why the use of public transportation is encouraged. In your opinion what are the pros and cons of using public transport?

It is widely believed that alot of people prefer to use public transport, while others argue that personal vehicles are the best mode of transport. Moreover, overly use of private cars is said to cause traffic cogestion in many cities, and that is the reason public transport is promoted. This essay will discuss advantages and […]

Some consumers are increasingly choosing to buy goods that are produced in their local area, rather than imported goods. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative trend?

The preference of individuals in goods or services is affected by various factors such as tastes, color, or even environment. However, while most people tend to go for imported products, some consumers are increasingly patronizing home made goods and services, and in my opinion, this is a positive trend. Choosing to buy locally made products […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (5 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress
Unlock All Courses & IELTS Tests
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
419,000₫ 277,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 9,233₫/ngày)
1,239,000₫ 597,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 6,633₫/ngày)
2,469,000₫ 1,027,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 5,706₫/ngày)
4,929,000₫ 1,417,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 3,936₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.