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Band 5+: The rise of platforms like YouTube and Instagram has led many young people to spend significant amounts of time online, sometimes at the expense of their academic responsibilities.

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

Nowadays, technological advancements keep developing. Some online applications such as YouTube and Instagram are believed to be the main impact on the time management of new generation. There are some possible consequences of this issue and useful solutions, which we will discuss now.

To start with its predicted problems, current technology-based devicements are likely to harm our overall well-being, especially physical strength. That is to say, young people are already driven to spend their time in front of the screen, and this is mainly because parents are reluctant to regulate their children’s screen time. Consequently, if the children are not taken under the control, they would lose their eyes strength, which in itself means that they might lose the chance to gain greater fulfillment in their everyday life. Above all, an excessive use of such platforms can lead to the failure in both work and private life.

On the other hand, while the issue is keeping to continuously danger our life, it is crucial to improve protection programs. Firstly, it is suggested not to be completely against these online equipments owing to their solutions to such distance-related problems. In other words, if the children are directed by tutors in a friendly way, they might prefer to use such devices in subject-related targets. Secondly, when the online information are sorted by parents or teachers, people get them and use for direct purposes. Finally, were it not for such online platforms, young people would not be ready to be able to perform these technology-based improvements.

All in all, although online platforms are thought to be harmful for our health, it is crucial to address it and direct it to the job prospect and study-related purposes in the future.

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