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Positive And Negative

Band 6+: These days more people put their personal information, such as names, addresses and telephone numbers, online for everyday activities such as socialising on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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These days, the number of people who are sharing their details on the internet is increasing. Although this technique may be more facilitated, it is a negative trend as putting private information online allows for data collection and online fraud.

Entering personal information online can be a convenience to the users. Many shopping platforms, such as AliExpress and Uzum Market request customers’ private information ( a person’s address, phone number, and gender) to create more opportunities. This serves to create a better service system. By registering location, phone number and address, and other types of private data on the websites, a person can connect easily with friends, relatives, colleagues, and like-minded people.

On the other hand, this trend appears some risks that lead to privacy concerns. Sometimes private information is used unauthorized or share of that information without users’ knowledge. In addition, putting personal data online is caused by a different type of drawbacks, such as online fraud, cybercrime, and stealing money from a card. Criminals can use that information to open another fake account or engage other criminal activities. This type of crime harms to ordinary citizens.

In conclusion, despite some numerous conveniences and modest advantages, entering personal details online is a negative development due to the possibility of online fraud.

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