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Band 7+: You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in major cities in Viet Nam. What are the reasons for this? Suggest some solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. You should write at least 250 words.

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Juvenile delinquency in major urban areas in Viet Nam is rising at an alarming rate. This essay will discuss some causes of this issue and suggest potential measures.

There are several reasons behind this negative trend of youth crime. The first contributing factor is inadequate parental supervision. The absence of emotional support and guidance from parents may be a catalyst for the growing hatred and hostility in lieu of sympathy and kindness during the children’s personality development. Similarly, the lack of parental intervention may result in no prevention when adolescents show early signs of wrongful thoughts. Consequently, these youths are inclined to deviant actions and unlawful activities. In addition, juvenile offences can be attributed to peer pressure and social influence since teenagers are mostly impressionable. Specifically, due to their desire to gain acceptance within a certain group, young people are susceptible to peer decisions. This is particularly the case for youths socializing with groups with rebellious and unethical behaviors. For instance, a teenager has a high tendency to commit crimes such as drug use or theft simply because of the encouragement from his friends, who are also involved in.

To address this problem, parents and schools should collaboratively take some effective actions. The first possible solution could be fostering family involvement. Creating a stable home environment plays a crucial role in preventing juvenile delinquency. Specifically, parents are responsible for providing emotional support, thorough surveillance and prompt counselling to ensure their children make sound and positive decisions rather than violent behaviors. Another practical approach would be academic support from schools. Education on positive values and emotional intelligence, such as generosity, conflict resolution, anger management, should be integrated into the curriculum alongside academic subjects. This ensures ethical values and the awareness of legal rights and duties are successfully instilled in each student. Furthermore, it is essential that extra-curricular activities be organized on a regular basis to provide youths with a healthy and constructive recreational environment. Such events are significant in helping adolescents abstain from deviant actions such as drug abuse or gambling.

In conclusion, the rise in youth crime in cities could stem from neglectful family and negative external influence. To tackle this worrying issue, parents’ attention and ethics-inclusive curriculum are the key elements. Criminals, particularly young criminals, are not born at first; they are actually created.

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