The concept of success has varying interpretations. Some individuals attribute success to hard work and determination, while others emphasize factors such as wealth and physical appearance as being more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It would be argued by some that people have different views about factors leading to people’s achievements. While I agree that diligence and persistence are more significant in achieving success, I believe that material wealth and physical appearance also play an essential role. On the one hand, there is no doubt that intense hard work […]