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Band 5+: You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. describe your purchase order of the book explain the importance of the book say what you want the company to do for you.

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my disappointment regarding the purchase of a book from your website which I still have not received despite the fact that few days have passed.

As for the details, I ordered the book with title ‘Think and Grow Rich’ by Napoleon Hill with order number AM-2892.

As my exams are drawing near, this book is highly important for my exam preparation. Not only the book contains ideas about establishing personal business but also the book possesses invaluable insights on nurturing long-term business.

Considering the importance of the book, I request you to process my order as soon as possible. In any other case, I want full refund of my order.

Your faithfully

Saqib

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

The letter fully addresses the task, clearly stating the issue, providing order details, explaining the importance of the book, and specifying the desired action. However, the tone could be more polite and less confrontational. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-structured and easy to follow, with each paragraph logically connected to the previous one. However, some cohesion devices could be used to link sentences within paragraphs more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but there is room for improvement. Using more precise and nuanced words (e.g., 'invaluable insights' could be replaced with 'priceless wisdom') would enhance the letter's overall quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor errors (e.g., 'few days have passed' could be 'it has been a few days'). A wider range of sentence structures would improve the letter's overall sophistication.

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