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Band 5+: You were doing a short course at another country. However, you had to leave the course unexpectedly to fly back home. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter explain why you had to leave describe which part of the course you enjoyed most thank your teacher for the course

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Dear Teacher Jenny,

I hope you are having a great day. The purpose of my e-mail is to informing you that I will leave and fly to Vietnam for new job next week. Everything seems to come all of a sudden. While I am exhilarated about finding a new job; simultaneously, down in the dumps that it is time to end of the class.

Since I have been moved to Philippines and engaged in ILETS courses from last December, true be told, I have gained a lot of English skills, and improved significantly. When it comes to the Listening class that you teach, you are always full of enthusiasm. You conveyed every skill clearly, as well as analyzed every question with patience. That attributes me to like studying English, and thrive on challenges.

The unexpected always happened. I will leave Philippines and would like to appreciate the courses that you teach. This period is an indelible time of my life and I will reminisce about these days. Your help is greatly appreciated.

Sincerely,

Iris

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the explanation of leaving could be more detailed and clearer. The reason for leaving is implied but not explicitly stated.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's structure is generally clear, but the flow could be improved. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although some word choices could be more precise and natural. There is potential for more sophisticated language use.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for enhancing the overall quality.

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