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Band 5+: You were doing a short course at another country. However, you had to leave the course unexpectedly to fly back home. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter explain why you had to leave describe which part of the course you enjoyed most thank your teacher for the course

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Dear sir

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to inform you I am apologized as I am going to discounting this course.

Actually, i got a job as a registered physiotherapist in Canada. I believe that it is great opportunity for me. It is my ambition to work as a registered physiotherapist assistant in Canada . Therefore I does not want to miss this job .

Although I am very thankful to you. You are the best teacher and always ready to help me in my difficult situations. During the course my favorite subject was anatomy. I really enjoyed this because you were explained everything in a great way. I still remember the phemonics which you created to learn the name of 12 cranial nerves which is OPHGAHVA. Your teaching strategies were fantastic. It will help full for my job.

I hope you will forgive me and understand my current situation.

Your sincerely

Aman

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements, explaining the reason for leaving the course, describing the most enjoyed part, and thanking the teacher. There are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved. For example, 'discounting this course' should be 'discontinuing this course'. Also, the letter could benefit from a slightly more formal tone in certain areas. To improve, focus on refining grammar and sentence structure for clarity and precision.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the flow is disrupted by several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing is adequate, but could be improved to better separate ideas. For example, the reason for leaving the course could be in its own paragraph. To improve coherence, ensure each sentence logically connects to the previous one and that transitions between ideas are smooth.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there is room for improvement in terms of range and precision. Some word choices are not entirely natural (e.g., 'discounting this course'). To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate more varied and sophisticated vocabulary related to the context of the letter. Focus on using synonyms and idiomatic expressions where appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. Common errors include incorrect verb tenses ('I am apologized'), subject-verb agreement issues ('I does not want'), and incorrect article usage. There are also issues with sentence structure and punctuation. To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules, proofreading carefully for errors, and practicing sentence construction. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct mistakes.

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