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Band 5+: Mental health problems are having a greater impact on people. Why is this? What solution can you suggest ?

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In recent years, meantal health issue has dramatically increased. Although there are some arguments to the contrary, I would like to reason as well as solutions on this problem.

The principle reason is that individuals put too much pressure on artists. Of course, they will react negatively everytime they have put unsatisfactory performances. If they keep criticizing them through social media, which has become more powerful than ever before, then, they will be too underpressured with doubt on their performances, which may lead to mental issue. For example, Canadian singer named Shawn Mendes, canceled his tour and vanished from the music industry for a year due to the pressure he had. In one interview, he even said that he once considered quiting his music carreer. However, thankfully, he returned with a massive hit song.

In order to solve this issue, with the help of technological advancement, we should educhate people on the possible dangers of criticizingthrough various social media platforms, such as Instagram, Twitter, and Facebook. Then, hopefully they will be aware and be considered on the artists. Another way to alleviate this is to warn at the beginning of every concert. Since the number of tours by singers have immensely popularized around the world, they absolutely have the right to defend themselves by warning dangers of criticizm at the start of their concerts.

In conclusion, although mental health problems have greater impact on individuals, there is reason and several solutions.

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