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Letter

Band 4+: A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job.

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Dear Mr. Peterson,

Recently, I’ve been doing well in my job. I am a cashier here in one of the best known garment here in our town. I’ve been thinking to change my job so I decided to apply in your good office.

If there’s a chance, I will do my best to do my job as a waitress. I am also responsible and I can handle all the situation or the task you will be giving to me. Best of all I am a hardworking person.

Lastly, let me know when my interview is. I am always available to attend an interview.

Thank you very much.

Sincerely yours,

Marianne Estrella

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

4.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but it could be more detailed and specific in outlining the applicant's skills and experience. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The ideas are not well connected, and the overall message is not easy to follow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but there is room for improvement in using more precise and varied language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing.

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