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Band 5+: One of your friends lives in another country. You want to spend some time working in that country and would like some advice from your friend about job possibilities. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter say why you want to work in that country give some information about your skills and work experience ask some questions about employment in that country (e.g. hours, salary)

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Dear Mohit,

I hope you are well! I am writing to express my interest seeking a job in a native country.

I want to tell you that I want to do work in a different country because I want to earn handsome salary, and spend good lifestyle. Moreover, I want explore new cultures and customs of the different regions. I feel monotoous from previous job, I am not satisfied from this job. I feel that I never become successful person in life because of this job; therefore, I need to change this place for working.

you know that I have two experiences, such as nursing and receptionate. I had been this jobs for five and two years in the Gupta hospital which is reputated in the Chandigarh. you can find these for me. If you don’t mind I want to ask some questions about working life in a different country, such as what your experience doing work in a native nation, and how did you manage it? For shifting in the new place, what do to do? such as learning skills, languages, and others.

Along side, you tell me that how much time for settlement in the different countries? I will wait for your call and message.

see you soon.

Best wishes,

Raj.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

different: 4

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The purpose is clear, skills and experience are mentioned, and relevant questions are asked. However, the response could be more focused and structured for maximum impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is generally understandable. However, the structure and flow could be improved for better clarity and cohesion. Some sentences lack a logical connection, impacting the overall readability.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is sufficient but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would enhance the letter's impact. Some word choices are slightly inaccurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

There are several grammatical errors and inaccuracies that affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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