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Band 4+: The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two pie charts: The first pie chart "Reasons for Doing MBA" with values: Better Job Opportunities 65%, Personal Development 12%, Ability to Help Others 8%, Ability to Do Job Better 15%. The second pie chart "What Employers Value Most" with values: Personality 25%, Presentation/Appearance 10%, Previous Experience (Connections) 20%, Qualifications 20%, Previous Experience (Knowledge) 25%.

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Given chart shows the result why mba graduates concerning their degree and employers for living them.

Generally the chart shows the doing mba study to their better job opportunities . While the highest number of student doing mba to their better job opportunities . However the lowest number of student doing mba to their ability to help others.

In my opinion, the number of student doing mba for their better job opportunities . While the personal development . however 8% students doing mba for their ability to help others and 12% student doing ability to do job better . looking for information to second chart, the number of student whose employee value most better than others. The personelity and previous experience was same percent of employee in their job. While the persentabtion and previous experience was 20% employee in their job. however 10&% of employee was qualification

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doing: 6

better: 5

student: 5

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employee: 4

chart: 3

opportunities: 3

while: 3

however: 3

ability: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but struggles to summarize the information effectively. The main features are not clearly selected and reported, and comparisons are weak. The overview is very general and doesn't provide a clear sense of the overall trends. The report needs to focus more on the key aspects of the charts and present them in a more organized manner. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The message is difficult to follow due to poor organization and unclear connections between ideas. Cohesion is weak, and the writing lacks logical flow. Paragraphing is present but not effectively used to structure the information. The report needs significant improvement in organizing information and using cohesive devices to create a more coherent text.

Lexical Resource

The range of vocabulary is limited, and there are inaccuracies in word choice. The language used is not always appropriate for academic writing. The report could benefit from a wider range of vocabulary and more precise language to describe the data. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding. Sentence structures are simple and often inaccurate. Punctuation is also problematic. The report requires substantial improvement in grammatical accuracy and the use of a wider range of sentence structures.

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Band 4+: The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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