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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of households in four countries (USA, Canada, Germany, and Mexico) with internet access in the years 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image presents a bar chart displaying household internet access percentages for the years 2000 and 2010 across four countries: USA: 2000 at 50%, 2010 at 70%; Canada: 2000 at 60%, 2010 at 80%; Germany: 2000 at 70%, 2010 at 90%; Mexico: 2000 at 30%, 2010 at 40%.

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The data illustrates a percentage of domestic products with able to high-acceleration of internet in six different countries from 2012 and 2022

Overall ,usage of internet in these five countries steadly declined throughout the period in 2010 but utilization of those were increased compared between 2012 and 2022.Despite this , the total percent of access to the excellent quality of internet in 2012 was lower than in 2022.

In 2012 Canada and USA had more able to the good internet , they are approximately achieve 80 percent , they have a same results ,while last three countries slightly decreased.

Access to the fast internet in 2012 was fewer than in 2022 , which is means that high quality internet became an more usage, Compared with both countries sprint internet gradually increased in every countries , with percentage that is in 5-10 percent.

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The report demonstrates an attempt to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The overall trends are not clearly identified, and the specific data points are not accurately represented. The language used is also unclear and contains grammatical errors, making it difficult to understand the analysis. To improve, focus on accurately describing the data, identifying key trends, and using clear and precise language. Proofread carefully to correct grammatical errors. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Paragraphing is weak, and the connections between sentences and ideas are not always clear. Consider organizing the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs focusing on specific trends or comparisons, and a concluding statement. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies and inappropriate word choices. The language used is not always precise or effective in conveying the information. For example, phrases like 'domestic products with able to high-acceleration of internet' and 'good internet' are not idiomatic or accurate. Expand your vocabulary related to describing data and trends (e.g., increase, decrease, fluctuate, peak, plateau, significant, marginal). Pay attention to using the correct form of words (e.g., nouns, verbs, adjectives) and avoiding redundancy.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect article usage, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede clarity and understanding. For example, the sentence 'Overall, usage of internet in these five countries steadly declined throughout the period in 2010 but utilization of those were increased compared between 2012 and 2022' is grammatically incorrect and difficult to interpret. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually progress to more complex structures as your accuracy improves. Proofread your work carefully to identify and correct errors.

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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of households in four countries (USA, Canada, Germany, and Mexico) with internet access in the years 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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