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Band 4+: The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The image contains two maps of Norbiton industrial area; the top map depicts the current layout featuring a river in the north, a factory in the southwest, multiple buildings primarily concentrated around a central circular road structure, and farmland in the east, whereas the bottom map illustrates the planned future development with the addition of houses replacing the factory area, a school and playground added, a more complex road layout connected to the existing circular road, and buildings spread out more evenly across the area.

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This maps illustrates, future plan of industrial area in the Norbiton city.To sum up, future map has more such facilities as shops,medical centre and etc.Also city will become more acommadated than it is right now because of futue housings and replacing factories.

As we can see,from the first map that factories have been replaced by housing.Also, farmland have been subsituted easter and have demolished of it is half.Above the river have been build a bridge which leads to huge housing .Road in the second map leads to a center where we can get to the sector,playground near of the playground we cann se a several housing.Also there have been added one more circle road wich will be usefull in the future.

In the end,as we see from the goal map.Norbitons industrial area will became much more comfortable for citizens than it is.Which also will usefull for tourism.Because it is near to the town.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by identifying some key changes in the planned development. However, the organization is somewhat lacking, and the description of changes could be more detailed and precise. The language contains errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on providing a more structured overview, using more specific vocabulary to describe the changes, and proofreading carefully for grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the main points and comparisons between the two maps. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, transition words like 'in contrast,' 'similarly,' 'furthermore,' and 'however' could improve the flow. Each paragraph should focus on a specific aspect of the changes or a comparison between the maps.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is over-reliance on general words like 'facilities,' 'accommodated,' 'useful,' and 'comfortable.' To improve, use more specific and descriptive vocabulary related to urban planning and development. For example, instead of 'facilities,' you could use 'amenities' or specify the types of facilities (e.g., 'retail outlets,' 'healthcare services'). Instead of 'comfortable,' consider 'liveable' or 'pleasant.' Expanding your vocabulary range will enhance the clarity and impact of your descriptions. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. For example, 'This maps illustrates' should be 'These maps illustrate,' and 'farmland have been subsituted easter' should be 'farmland has been moved further east.' There are also issues with article usage (e.g., 'a bridge' vs. 'the bridge') and prepositional phrases. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Review and correct each sentence carefully to ensure grammatical accuracy. Consider using grammar-checking tools and seeking feedback from a language tutor to identify and correct recurring errors.

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