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Band 5+: You are a member of a student council at school. write a letter to a council asking to improve school library describe why improving the library is important for students suggest specific improvments say how improvments will be benefit.

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Dear Sir,

The reason why I am addressing you is that I want to inform about incovenience in the school library, which is lacking in recourses and facilities as well as request you to renew it.

Improving the library is very essential for the academic development of our students. A well-equipped library is not only a source of knowledge but also a place for students to enhance thier research skills, critical thinking and creativity.

I would like to suggest several spesific improvements. Firstly, we need to update a collection of books in order to create much more learning atmosphere. Aditionally, we also need modren computers to reseach important information from vebsites.

In my view, these improvements will greatly benefit our students in many ways. By offering best facilities and a wider selection of books , students will be able to prepare for their studies more effectively.

I look forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible

Best regards,

Lola Axmedova.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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students: 4

library: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses the task by outlining the need for library improvements, suggesting specific changes, and explaining the benefits. The letter is well-structured and easy to follow.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally coherent, but there are some minor issues with sentence structure and flow that make it slightly difficult to follow at times. The use of paragraphs is appropriate.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and spelling. The use of vocabulary is generally appropriate for the task.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains a number of grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. These errors affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter.

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