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Band 6+: You recently bought an item online. When it was delivered you found that the item did not work correctly. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, • Describe the item and the problem with it • Explain why the item is important for you • Say what you want the manager to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express the disappointment I have experienced after purchasing one of your products online that was not working properly.

I have ordered your Kitchenaid Grinder on Thursday, October 1, 2024. I received it on October 3, 2024, at 5 PM. After unboxing and when trying to put it to the test I discovered the grinder was not working up to its potential and it was broken.

I relied on the reviews and references. I heard so much about this product everywhere. So, I thought this was going to be the best fit for carrying out all my work as being the all-in-one use. As a true American, I want to give one more chance to made in USA product.

Hence, I would suggest I get a replacement for this same model at the earliest. I know it can be one in a million defected thing that I have received.

I would appreciate it if you looked into this personally and helped me find a better mixer yourself.

Yours faithfully,

David Bami

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements could enhance clarity and impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure is generally clear, but some sentences could be better connected for improved flow. Minor grammatical issues affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary is appropriate for the context, but a wider range and more precise word choices would strengthen the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter is understandable, several grammatical inaccuracies and inconsistent tense usage detract from the overall fluency and precision.

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