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Band 7+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a bar chart detailing the percentage of Australian men and women who engaged in regular physical activity in 2010 across five age groups. For ages 15 to 24, men are at 52.8% and women at 47.7%; ages 25 to 34 show men at 42.2% and women at 48.9%; ages 35 to 44 present men at 39.5% and women at 52.5%; ages 45 to 54 record men at 43.1% and women at 53.3%; ages 55 to 64 depict men at 45.1% and women at 53%; ages 65 and over illustrate men at 46.7% and women at 47.1%.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of australian people, both men and women, divided into six different categories of age groups (from 15 to 65 and over years old) who did daily physical activity in 2010.

Overall, we can notice how the highest percentage of women doing physical activity is women between 55 and 64 years old (68%), while the highest number of men who train daily is in the first category (15-24-year-old men with 52,8%). The lowest percentage of males is from 35 to 44 years old (36,5%), while that of females is women aged 65 and over (47,1%).

Furthermore, the number of males decreases from the first category to the 35-44 age group, while it grows between the latter and the 65 and over. Conversely, the number of women increases from aged 15-24 to people who are 55-64 years old and then it finally falls in the last category.

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The report covers the main features of the bar chart and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., the highest percentage for women and the lowest for men). To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and directly reflects the information in the chart. Also, consider including more specific details and a broader range of comparisons to enhance the depth of the analysis.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a clear overview and identifies key trends in the data. The information is logically organized, making it easy to follow the comparisons between men and women across different age groups. To improve coherence, consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For instance, transition words or phrases could be used to signal shifts in focus or to emphasize comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary suitable for describing the data. Terms like 'percentage,' 'age groups,' and 'physical activity' are used appropriately. To further enhance lexical resource, consider incorporating more precise vocabulary related to trends and comparisons, such as 'peak,' 'decline,' 'fluctuate,' or 'outnumber.' This would add nuance and sophistication to the description.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report generally exhibits good grammatical control, with accurate sentence structures and punctuation. While there are minor errors, they do not significantly impede understanding. To improve grammatical range, consider incorporating a wider variety of sentence structures, such as complex sentences with subordinate clauses, to express more intricate relationships between data points. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles to enhance accuracy.

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