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Band 5+: The first chart below shows hoe energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which results from this enegy.

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The image displays two pie charts: The first chart details Australian household energy use with percentages as follows: water heating 32%, other appliances 15%, refrigeration 13%, heating 42%, cooling 2%, lighting 8%. The second chart outlines Australian household greenhouse gas emissions with the following percentages: heating 15%, water heating 32%, cooling 1%, lighting 8%, refrigeration 14%, other appliances 28%.

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The two pie charts illustrate how Australian households use energy and the greenhouse gas emissions. Overall, heating is the most significant contributor to energy and water heating and other appliances for gas emissions and cooling and lighting are the least contributors on both charts.

As regards the use of energy, heating is in the first place, with 42%, followed by water heating with 30% and other appliances are next with 15%. Australian households do not use much energy for refrigeration, cooling and lighting(7%, 2%, 4% respectively).

As for gas emissions, water heating and other appliances are responsible for 60% of them (water heating 32%, other appliances 28%). Heating and refrigeration produce almost the same emissions with 15% and 14% respectively, while lighting(8%) and cooling(3%) are again in the last place.

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heating: 7

energy: 4

emissions: 4

other: 4

appliances: 4

water: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the requirements of the task, providing an overview and highlighting key features of both pie charts. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., water heating is 32%, not 30% and lighting is 8% not 4%). To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and consider a more structured approach to comparing and contrasting the data in both charts. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has an identifiable overall structure, including an introduction, overview, and paragraphs focusing on specific details from the charts. However, the flow between sentences and ideas could be improved. Transitions could be used more effectively to guide the reader through the information. For example, in the second paragraph, you could add a transition word to show the relationship between heating and water heating. Also, the organization of information within paragraphs could be more logical. Consider grouping similar categories together or presenting information in a more consistent order.

Lexical Resource

The report uses adequate vocabulary to describe the data in the charts. However, there's room to enhance the range and precision of word choices. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'in the first place' or 'in the last place,' try using synonyms or more descriptive phrases like 'constitutes the largest proportion' or 'accounts for the smallest share.' Also, consider using more specific vocabulary related to energy consumption and emissions to demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and accurate preposition usage. For example, 'water heating with 30%' should be 'water heating with 32%'. Review and correct these errors to improve the overall grammatical accuracy of your writing. Also, ensure that punctuation is used correctly to enhance readability.

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