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Band 6+: The bart chart shows the number of overseas students enrolled in a third year Computer Science course at a Canadian college.

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The image displays a stacked bar chart illustrating enrollment numbers for a "Networking core option" and a "Database core option," broken down by gender (M/F) across five countries. For Singapore, male enrollment is 4 in Database and 1 in Networking (total 5), while female enrollment is 2 in Database and 5 in Networking (total 7). In Malaysia, male enrollment is 3 in Database and 1 in Networking (total 4), and female enrollment is 1 in Database and 6 in Networking (total 7). In China, male enrollment is 7 in Database and 1 in Networking (total 8), and female enrollment is 2 in Database and 7 in Networking (total 9). In Sri Lanka, male enrollment is 6 in Database and 2 in Networking (total 8), while female enrollment is 1 in Database and 3 in Networking (total 4). Lastly, for France, male enrollment is 1 in Database and 1 in Networking (total 2), and female enrollment is 3 in Database and 0 in Networking (total 3).

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The bar chart indicates the number of foreign female and male students attending a third year Computer Science course with Networking core and Database core at a Canadian college.

Overall, the majority of Chinese female students enrolled in the Networking core option, which shows the highest 7 points, similarly with male students who attended Database. In France, virtually all female students majored in the Database option with 3 points, while the male students with 2 points were divided in half between the options. The second highest points in Networking were shown by Malaysian women – 6 points, and the third by Singaporean females – 5 points.

Overall, the female gender applicants have attended from all countries to the Networking core option with an aggregate of 21 points, and the bulk of male students enrolled in Networking was just 6, and Database – 21 points.

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points: 7

students: 6

networking: 5

female: 4

database: 4

option: 3

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The report addresses the task, providing an overview and highlighting some key features of the bar chart. However, there are some omissions and inaccuracies in the data reported. To improve, ensure all significant trends and data points are accurately represented and consider a more structured approach to comparing and contrasting the data. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally coherent and logically organized, with a clear overview and some attempt to group information. However, the flow could be improved with more explicit transitions between ideas. For example, the shift from discussing Chinese students to French students feels a bit abrupt. Consider using transition words or phrases to guide the reader more smoothly. Paragraphing is generally adequate, but could be refined to better reflect the main points being discussed in each paragraph.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary to describe the bar chart, including terms like 'majority,' 'virtually all,' 'divided in half,' and 'aggregate.' However, there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'points,' consider alternative expressions like 'enrollment numbers' or 'student count.' Also, explore synonyms for common words to enhance the sophistication of your vocabulary. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

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The report exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, the sentence 'Overall, the majority of Chinese female students enrolled in the Networking core option, which shows the highest 7 points, similarly with male students who attended Database' is awkward and could be restructured for better flow and accuracy. Pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and appropriate word order. Proofreading carefully for these errors will significantly improve the grammatical accuracy of your writing.

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