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Band 9: You recently borrowed a valuable item from a friend, and unfortunately, it was damaged while in your possession. Write a letter to your friend explaining the situation. You should include details about: - describing how the damage occurred - expressing your regret and taking responsibility - suggesting a way to compensate for the damage.

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Dear Shivam,

I am writing this letter to apologize for damaging the book you lent me last week.

A few days ago, while I was enjoying my coffee and reading the book in the early morning, my younger brother suddenly ran towards me and bumped into me. Before I could react, I saw tea spill onto the book. I have already dried the pages, but some of them are still wrinkled.

I have spoken with the supplier and sent the book for repair. I believe it can be fixed to its original condition; if not, I will make sure to buy a new copy and give it to you.

Once again, I would like to sincerely apologize for this incident. I know that the book is one of your favorites, and I promise to return it to you in as close to the same condition as you lent it to me.

Warm regards,

Aditya Sharma

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A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, providing a clear explanation of the incident, the steps taken to rectify it, and a suggestion for compensation. The response is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To further enhance the response, consider adding more specific details about the compensation, such as offering to replace the book regardless of whether it can be repaired.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is very well-organized and easy to follow. The progression of ideas is logical, and the use of cohesive devices is natural and effective. Paragraphing is also well-managed, contributing to the overall clarity of the message.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a wide range of vocabulary used accurately and appropriately. The language is natural and sophisticated, enhancing the overall quality of the writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter exhibits a wide range of grammatical structures with full flexibility and control. Grammar and punctuation are used appropriately throughout, contributing to the letter's clarity and effectiveness.

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