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Band 6+: You recently attended a workshop that a friend recommended, but it was poorly organized and not helpful. Write a letter to your friend about your experience. You should include: - Express your disappointment with the workshop - Explain specific issues you encountered - Suggest how your friend could avoid similar situations in the future.

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Hijjama Workshop:

Hi Petter,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter because you organized this hijjama workshop and everyone has to give his/her feedback. According to my point of view the workshop was amazing and informative, but there are certain things i would like to mention and that is time management, selecting a huge hall room for greater number of people gathering. You can improve these things in future if you work on time management by strictly mentioning the starting and ending hours of the workshop so everyone will come on time and the workshop will start and end on it’s time. On the other hand you should select a huge hall room so there would no suffocation and plenty of people can attend the workshop comfortably.

I hope this feedback would help you know what to do to enhance future workshops. I may wish you a best of luck for your future workshops.

Thanks!

Your Colleague.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

workshop: 5

would: 3

future: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by providing feedback on the workshop, mentioning appreciated aspects and areas for improvement. The suggestions are relevant and explain how they would enhance future workshops. To improve, consider providing more specific examples or details to support your points. For instance, instead of just saying 'time management,' you could mention specific sessions that ran late or early. Also, the tone could be slightly more professional and less conversational.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider using more distinct paragraphs to separate the points you want to make. For example, dedicate one paragraph to what you appreciated, another to areas for improvement, and a final one to the impact of those improvements. Transition phrases could also be used to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to use more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of 'amazing and informative,' you could use more specific adjectives to describe what made the workshop good. Similarly, 'huge hall room' could be replaced with a more descriptive phrase like 'spacious venue.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage ('the,' 'a,' 'an'). For example, 'everyone has to give his/her feedback' could be rephrased for better accuracy and flow. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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