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Band 6+: You recently bought a piece of electronic equipment from a local store, but it has developed a problem after only a few days of use. Write a letter to the store manager.

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Dear Mr. Asad,

I am writing this letter in regard to the recent LED i bought from your store.

As you know, I recently purchased the new TCL LED tv from you last Monday around 2:30 PM. It was a 55 inch mini led, consisting of three HDMI ports. Its Model no is 3345-P and serial no is 44567.

I picked up this televison for my multimedia needs, and was shocked to find out that one of the HDMI ports was not working. On connecting, the port was not able to transfer image from my laptop to the screen. I am still able to hear the sounds but the display remains blank.

Holidays are just around the corner and i was really looking forward to enjoying it during the holidays. I would really appreciate if you could deliver me a replacement of this product by tomorrow afternoon.

Looking forward to your response,

Yours Sincerely,

Haris Abdul Rehman

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter fully addresses all parts of the task. The writer provides specific details regarding the product (model and serial numbers), clearly explains the technical fault (HDMI port issue), and proposes a specific resolution (replacement by a certain time). The tone is appropriate for a formal complaint, and the information is presented logically. To further enhance the quality, ensure consistent capitalization (e.g., 'i' should always be 'I'), though this does not detract from the overall task achievement.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is logically organized, and the progression of ideas is clear. You have addressed all three bullet points from the prompt in a structured manner. To improve, ensure that transitions between paragraphs feel more natural. For instance, the transition to the 'Holidays' paragraph is a bit abrupt; connecting your disappointment about the faulty product to the upcoming holidays more smoothly would enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

You have used a good range of vocabulary related to the topic, such as 'multimedia needs,' 'transfer image,' and 'replacement.' However, there are some minor inaccuracies and informalities. For example, 'the recent LED i bought' is slightly awkward; 'the LED TV I recently purchased' would be more professional. Also, ensure you capitalize the pronoun 'I' consistently throughout the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical errors that prevent a higher score. Specifically, there are issues with capitalization (e.g., 'i' instead of 'I', 'televison' instead of 'television', and 'Model no' instead of 'Model No.'), and some phrasing is slightly ungrammatical (e.g., 'the recent LED i bought' should be 'the LED TV I recently bought'). Pay close attention to punctuation and the capitalization of proper nouns and personal pronouns to improve accuracy.

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Band 6+: You recently bought a piece of electronic equipment from a local store, but it has developed a problem after only a few days of use. Write a letter to the store manager.

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