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Band 6+: why is that many people today don't do enough healthy activities?

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I think many people today don't do enough healthy activities because so many people are working every day and don't have enough time. Teenagers and young people today are doing homework every day, watching films, and using their phones for hours. Many people find healthy activities and other activities boring, which contributes to this lack of engagement in healthier lifestyles.

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I think many people today don’t do enough health activities because nowadays so many people working every day and don’t have enough time when I have health activities and teenager and young people today are doing homework every day and watching a film and uses phone every hours and so many people bore it like such as the health activities and other activities a bore it for this.

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enough: 2

healthy: 2

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