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Band 6+: The chart below shows the results of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. They were asked if they thought things would improve or get worse.

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The image displays a horizontal bar graph titled "Young people's expectations for change" with five categories: Communication between people, Quality of food, Quality of water, Quality of air in cities, Health; each category has two bars representing percentages of "will improve" and "get worse". Communication between people: will improve 54%, get worse 46%. Quality of food: will improve 49%, get worse 51%. Quality of water: will improve 40%, get worse 60%. Quality of air in cities: will improve 23%, get worse 70%. Health: will improve 42%, get worse 58%. The percentage scale ranges from 0% to 100%.

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The bar chart illustrates, the expectations for change in 5 different areas in life after 20 years, it also shows if they believe if its going to improve or get worse.

Overall, most of the industries are expected to get worse rather than improve, except for the communication between people.

To begin with communication between people is the only area in life expected to improve by 54%, unlike the other industries, they are expected to get worse. For instance, quality of food, water, air in the city, and health. The highest decrease is the quality of air, from 23% to 70%.

In general, the highest bars are communication between people and quality of food. Although one of them decreased which is the quality of food, from 49% to 51%. Quality of water and health fall in between, by 40% to 60% for the quality of water, and from 42% to 58% for health.

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quality: 6

between: 4

improve: 3

expected: 3

communication: 3

water: 3

health: 3

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The report covers the main trends and key features of the bar chart, providing relevant data to support the observations. However, there's room for improvement in terms of organization and depth of analysis. To enhance the response, consider structuring the information more logically, perhaps by grouping categories with similar trends together. Also, try to provide more specific comparisons and contrasts between the different areas to offer a more comprehensive overview.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. The 'Overall' paragraph is a good start, but the subsequent paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. Consider grouping similar trends together and using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, you could combine the discussion of areas expected to worsen into a single, well-structured paragraph.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. Instead of repeatedly using phrases like 'expected to get worse,' try synonyms such as 'predicted to decline' or 'anticipated to deteriorate.' Also, consider using more specific vocabulary related to the categories, such as 'environmental quality' for air and water. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, the first sentence is a run-on sentence. There are also issues with pronoun usage ('its' instead of 'it's') and sentence structure. While the range of structures is present, accuracy needs improvement. Focus on proofreading for common errors and varying sentence structures to enhance grammatical control.

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