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Band 5+: The chart below shows the results of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. They were asked if they thought things would improve or get worse.

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The image displays a horizontal bar graph titled "Young people's expectations for change" with five categories: Communication between people, Quality of food, Quality of water, Quality of air in cities, Health; each category has two bars representing percentages of "will improve" and "get worse". Communication between people: will improve 54%, get worse 46%. Quality of food: will improve 49%, get worse 51%. Quality of water: will improve 40%, get worse 60%. Quality of air in cities: will improve 23%, get worse 70%. Health: will improve 42%, get worse 58%. The percentage scale ranges from 0% to 100%.

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The given chart illustrates the consequences of a European research into young people’s expectations for change in five areas of life in the next two decades.

Overall, it can be clearly seen that the quality of air in cities will worsen, which is the highest number in this chart, respectively, the least one is the air improvement. Although, the main part of these different areas is getting worse.

As for the improvements, young people expect that in the future, there will be improvement in the category of “communication between people” with 54%, while others think that the 46% will worsen. The highest number in this chart is the category ” quality of air in cities” 70% , they think that quality of air will decline in the next 20 years, as improvement in this area predicts 23%, which is the least.

In terms of other 3 areas, “quality of food” has a 49% expectation of improvements, while more than a half consider that it will get worse,the difference between expectations is almost 2%. Quality of water and health categories has a 2% difference, with 40% and 42% number of improvement respectively, while more than a half number of people predict it will worsen in the next two decades.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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quality: 4

number: 4

improvement: 4

chart: 3

areas: 3

worsen: 3

while: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and provides a clear overview of the trends. You have successfully identified the key categories and the general sentiment of the survey. However, there are some inaccuracies in how data is presented and some grammatical issues that affect clarity. For example, stating that 'the main part of these different areas is getting worse' is a bit vague; it would be better to say that 'in most categories, more people expect things to get worse.' Additionally, ensure that your comparisons are precise. While you correctly identified the highest and lowest values, some sentence structures are slightly awkward (e.g., 'the least one is the air improvement'). Aim for smoother transitions between your observations to improve the overall flow.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the cohesion is weakened by improper use of transition words. For example, starting a sentence with 'Although' in the overview is grammatically incorrect in this context, and the use of 'respectively' in the overview is misplaced. To improve, ensure that cohesive devices (like 'In contrast', 'Furthermore', or 'However') are used to link ideas smoothly rather than just placing them at the start of sentences without proper grammatical integration.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is sufficient to convey the basic meaning, but there is significant repetition and some awkward phrasing. Phrases like 'the highest number in this chart' and 'more than a half number of people' are repetitive and lack the sophistication required for higher bands. Try to use more varied synonyms for 'improvement' (e.g., enhancement, betterment) and 'worsen' (e.g., decline, deteriorate). Additionally, avoid using 'consequences' in the introduction, as the chart shows 'expectations' or 'opinions', not the actual results or consequences of the research.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical issues that affect the flow of the report. There are errors in sentence structure, such as comma splices (joining two independent clauses with only a comma) and improper use of conjunctions. For instance, 'the difference between expectations is almost 2%' is a separate thought that should be joined more formally. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that punctuation (especially commas and periods) is used to clearly separate distinct ideas.

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