Pie Chart

Band 4+: Task Description The pie charts below show the proportions of energy production from different sources in a country in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 2000: Coal: 30% Gas: 25% Nuclear: 20% Renewables: 15% Oil: 10% 2010: Coal: 35% Gas: 30% Nuclear: 10% Renewables: 20% Oil: 5%

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Image for topic: Task Description The pie charts below show the proportions of energy production from different sources in a country in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 2000: Coal: 30% Gas: 25% Nuclear: 20% Renewables: 15% Oil: 10% 2010: Coal: 35% Gas: 30% Nuclear: 10% Renewables: 20% Oil: 5%

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The image displays a pie chart for energy production in 2000 with specific sections labeled: Coal 25%, Gas 25%, Nuclear 25%, Renewables 20%, Oil 5%. Additional smaller pie depicting Coal 20%, Oil 35%, Nuclear 25%, Renewable 20%. Another accompanying diagram shows Coal 30%, Oil 20%, Nuclear 35%, Renewables 20%. Numbers around an industrial illustration indicate Coal 20%, Oil 26%, and two separate listings of Coal at 25%, Nuclear at 25%, and Renewables at 20%.

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The pie chart above shows us the difference in energy production between the years 2000 and 2010,where we can see the difference in energy production with different substances over the decade.

We are able to see a clear pattern with the substances coal,gas,renewables and oil, this pattern have shown us a clear increase by 5% unlike nuclear energy which went against the pattern by decreasing.

While most substances have shown an increase, nuclear energy was the only substance showing us a different outcome both in terms of numbers and from increasing/decreasing as it has not only decreased it has also doubled the number of the other substances by decreasing from 10% to 20%,unlike the other substances where they at max only increased by 5%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

substances: 5

energy: 4

pattern: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some main features and attempts to make comparisons, but it contains inaccuracies and generalizations. The description of the data is not always precise, and there are some misunderstandings of the numerical changes. To improve, focus on providing accurate data and specific comparisons, and avoid generalizations. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the main points and comparisons. Consider structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs focusing on specific trends or comparisons, and a conclusion. Use cohesive devices (e.g., transition words, pronouns) to link ideas and sentences together more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is repetition of words like 'substances' and 'increase/decrease.' To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to energy production and changes over time. For example, instead of 'substances,' you could use 'energy sources' or 'fuel types.' Use synonyms to avoid repetition and demonstrate a broader vocabulary range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'this pattern have shown us' should be 'this pattern has shown us.' Also, the sentence structure is often convoluted, making it difficult to understand the intended meaning. Focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. Consider using a grammar checker to help identify areas for improvement.

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