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Band 6+: Do you think children should learn to play musical instruments?

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I believe that children should learn to play musical instruments for two reasons. Firstly, it helps them clear their path, and if they are interested in certain instruments, they can pursue it as a future career. Secondly, some children have musical talent, and it helps them discover themselves and also express their personality.

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I believe that children should learn to play musical instruments for two reasons. Firstly, it helps them to clear their path and if they are interested in some musical instruments, they can continue it as a future career. Secondly, some children have musical talent and it helps them to discover themselves and also some intro some some person has

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musical: 2

instruments: 2

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The answer presents two reasons, which is good for coherence. However, there are some hesitations and repetitions ('some intro some some person has') that affect fluency. Try to avoid unnecessary pauses and repetitions by practicing speaking more smoothly and thinking ahead about what you want to say.

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The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. For example, instead of 'clear their path,' you could use 'explore their interests' or 'develop their potential.' Expanding your vocabulary related to music and child development would be beneficial.

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