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Band 9: Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilitis. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter: describe what you like about the library. say what you don't like. make suggestions for improvements.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to the recommendations you have requested to the citizens to enhance the library.

First, I would like to let you know the distinguishing aspects of this place. What I truly enjoy most is the enormous space on the second floor to comfortably read and relax, especially when I have the chance to sit on the red cotton couch near the jazz music section.

However, lately I have been struggling with the poor lighting during my readings. Due to the lack of windows near the reading section, it is very difficult to read without additional light.

Therefore, I would suggest installing more lamps or reorganizing the place in order to have more natural sunlight. Moreover, it would be beneficial to find poetry volumes in your collection. Finally, a useful improvement would be developing a website to order books online.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Paz.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, clearly outlining what the writer likes about the library, what they dislike, and providing suggestions for improvement. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To further enhance the response, consider adding more specific details to the suggestions to make them even more impactful.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter presents a clear and logical flow of ideas, making it easy to follow. The paragraphing is well-managed, contributing to the overall coherence of the letter. The use of cohesive devices is natural and effective.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a wide range of vocabulary used accurately and appropriately. The language is natural and sophisticated, enhancing the overall quality of the letter. The writer effectively uses descriptive language to convey their points.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter exhibits a wide range of grammatical structures with full flexibility and control. Grammar and punctuation are used appropriately throughout the letter, contributing to its clarity and readability. There are virtually no grammatical errors or phrasing issues.

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