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Band 7+: Write a letter to your neighbor, requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: - Your reason for writing - What you would like to happen - A nice, respectful style

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Dear Mr. Johnson,

I am Rabaf Nasser, your next door neighbour. I live in apartment A. I am writing this letter to complain for the nonstop barking of your puppy!

For the past couple of weeks, I have noticed that you adopted a little dog. Apparently, it is too young and needs proper care.

I suggest you take the vet’s advice on a suitable diet for such breed and age.

A well-fed dog will bark less, especially at night. Moreover, if I were you, I would hire a dog trainer for potty training. I noticed some animal waste on the stairs. It must have been your dog, since you are the only pet owner in the building.

I do not want to invade your privacy and lecture you all over about taking care of a pet. Yet, it is pretty much disturbing.

I need to wake up early and catch the metro to go to work. I am a dog person myself, and I would love to walk your precious dog when I have the time for it.

Your immediate action at the earliest convenient time would be highly appreciated.

Kind regards,

Rahaf

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements by stating the reason for writing, suggesting solutions, and maintaining a respectful tone. However, the tone could be more consistently polite and less accusatory in certain parts. To improve, focus on softening the language used when making suggestions and avoid direct accusations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and the purpose is clear from the beginning. The progression of ideas is logical, moving from the reason for writing to specific suggestions. However, the transition between expressing concern and offering unsolicited advice could be smoother. Consider softening the tone when transitioning to suggestions to maintain a respectful style throughout the letter.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and appropriate for the task. Phrases like 'nonstop barking' and 'animal waste' are relevant. To enhance the lexical resource, consider using more varied and nuanced language to express your concerns and suggestions. For example, instead of 'pretty much disturbing,' you could say 'quite disruptive' or 'causing considerable disturbance.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar, with only minor errors. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage. For example, 'complain for the nonstop barking' should be 'complain about the nonstop barking.' Overall, the grammar is accurate enough to convey the message clearly.

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