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Band 5+: Comparing Fruit Sales at a Farmers' Market and a Supermarket. The fruits are: pears, pinapples, oranges and strawberries.

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The image shows a bar graph titled 'Top Selling Fruits' comparing the 'Number of Fruit Boxes' sold at a Farmers' Market versus a Supermarket. For strawberries, sales were Farmers' Market: 7, Supermarket: 3. For oranges, sales were Farmers' Market: 6, Supermarket: 4. For pears, sales were Farmers' Market: 5, Supermarket: 8. For cherries, sales were Farmers' Market: 2, Supermarket: 2. For pineapples, sales were Farmers' Market: 2, Supermarket: 2.

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The chart above gives information about fruit sales comparison between Farmer’s market and supermarket. Strawberry, orange, pear, cherry, and pineapple are the fruit are ther fruit that surveyed.

Strawberry is the most popular fruits in Farmer’s market, with an average seven boxes are being sold. Orange rank second in popularity within Farmer’s market costumer, which sold aroud six boxes. This is followed by pear as third rank for the sales performance with five boxes are being sold. Cherry and pineapple has the lowest performance in sales, they are being sold only by two boxes

On the supermaret, pear is the most famous food with eight boxes are being sold followed by strawberry as second with seven boxes being sold. Differ from costumer at Farmer’s market orange become the third popular fruit with only four boxes are being sold. Cherry and pineapple in supermarker has the same popularity and sales performance with Farmer’s market which ranked last, which only sold for two boxes

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boxes: 7

being: 6

farmer's: 5

market: 5

fruit: 4

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orange: 3

cherry: 3

pineapple: 3

which: 3

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The report identifies key trends and provides some comparison between the two venues. However, there are inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., strawberry sales in the supermarket) and some issues with language accuracy. To improve, ensure data is accurately represented and proofread for grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a basic overview of the data but suffers from organizational issues. The information is somewhat scattered, and the transitions between discussing the farmer's market and the supermarket could be smoother. Consider using more explicit transition words and phrases to guide the reader. Paragraphing could be improved to group related information more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite basic and repetitive. There's a reliance on simple words like 'popular' and 'sold.' To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to describe the sales figures and comparisons. For example, instead of 'most popular,' you could use 'highest-selling' or 'most in-demand.' Vary your language to make the report more engaging and demonstrate a better command of vocabulary. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'fruit are ther fruit that surveyed' and 'with an average seven boxes are being sold' demonstrate fundamental errors. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to catch and correct these errors before submitting your work.

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