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Band 4+: The pie chart and the line graph shows the workforce and the unemployment in Australia from 1996 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. (Mixed Charts)

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The image shows two visual data summaries: a pie chart and a line graph. Left: pie chart "Workforce in Australia by place of birth (2003)": Born in Australia 76%, NESC 14%, and ESC 10%. Right: line graph "Unemployment in Australia by place of birth (1993-2003)": Year-by-year data (percentage of group): 1993: Australia 9%, ESC 7%, NESC 15%; 1995: Australia 8%, ESC 6%, NESC 13%; 1997: Australia 7%, ESC 6%, NESC 11%; 1999: Australia 6%, ESC 5%, NESC 9%; 2001: Australia 6%, ESC 4.5%, NESC 7%; 2003: Australia 6%, ESC 4%, NESC 7%.

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The pie chart and the line graph are illustrate the workforce and the unemployment in Australia from 1996 to 2003.

As we can see, the pie chart are showing workforce in Australia by place of birth for 2003. The largest part it is the percent of people who was born in Australia which contains 76 precent. In comprasion with it there are side that named ESC which means workers was born in English – Speaking countries other than Australia. Also this part contains 10 precent. And the last piece of the pie chart is NESC. That means the workes was born in non – English – Speaking countries. Their precents on chart is 14.

On the other hand, there are a line chart. It illustrates an unemployment in Australia by place of birth from 1993 to 2003. ahhhhh help me please i cant do it anymoree.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

chart: 5

australia: 5

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the pie chart and providing some details about the workforce in Australia by place of birth. However, the description of the line graph is incomplete, and the analysis lacks depth and comparison between the two visuals. The writing also contains grammatical errors and lacks coherence. To improve, focus on fully describing both visuals, making relevant comparisons, and ensuring grammatical accuracy. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has some coherence issues. The introduction is present, but the second paragraph is not well-structured. The third paragraph starts but is incomplete. Paragraphing needs improvement to clearly separate the descriptions of the pie chart and the line graph. The report needs to fully describe the line graph to achieve better coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive ('percent,' 'part'). There's a need for a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data more effectively. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'part,' consider using terms like 'segment,' 'proportion,' or 'share.' Also, try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to trends and data analysis. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('pie chart are showing'), incorrect word usage ('in comprasion'), and punctuation errors. Sentence structure is simple and lacks complexity. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences with subordinate clauses) and ensure correct subject-verb agreement and tense usage.

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