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Band 6+: How can societies effectively address the issue of income inequality and promote social mobility?

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Society can address income inequality through a combination of economic, social, and institutional measures. Firstly, progressive taxation is one of the most effective methods, as it involves taxing higher incomes at higher rates. The government can reduce barriers and fund public services such as healthcare, education, and social welfare programs. These services reduce the financial burden on lower-income groups and promote greater equality of opportunity. Another effective approach is strengthening labor market policies.

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