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Band 4+: You borrowed an item from a friend a while ago and have not yet returned it. Write a letter to your friend. You should include details about: - apologizing for the delay - explaining the reason for the delay - suggesting a specific time when you can return the item

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Dear lily,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to apologize for not returning yours car that I borrowed from last month that I should bring return to you earlier

Becausen nowadays I have been using it to go work for a months since my car in being repaired at garage. From 4 weeks ago. In addition I had call to check and have a good news my car will be done in 2 weeks.

However I will return your car by cleaned with full fule after my car is done and return. Must take two more by now on. Thank you very much for your help me pass the hard situation see you soon.

Take care

Mimi

Word Count: 120

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

return: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by apologizing, explaining the delay, and stating when the car will be returned. However, the language contains errors that occasionally obscure meaning. To improve, focus on using correct grammar and vocabulary to clearly convey your message. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas is frequently disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to separate distinct points. To improve coherence, focus on using clearer transitions between sentences and paragraphs, and ensure each paragraph addresses a single, focused idea.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate ('yours car,' 'full fule'). There's a lack of sophisticated or precise language, which limits the clarity and impact of the message. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to apologies, explanations, and promises. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and more appropriate words. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('I am writing to apologize for not returning yours car'), incorrect word forms ('Becausen'), and awkward sentence structures ('Must take two more by now on'). These errors significantly impede understanding. To improve, concentrate on mastering basic grammar rules, such as subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper article usage. Review and correct your work carefully, and consider using grammar-checking tools to identify and fix errors.

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Band 4+: You borrowed an item from a friend a while ago and have not yet returned it. Write a letter to your friend. You should include details about: - apologizing for the delay - explaining the reason for the delay - suggesting a specific time when you can return the item

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