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Band 5+: The graph below shows the percentage of households in a European country using renewable energy (solar, wind, and biomass) for heating and electricity between 2000 and 2020.

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The image shows a line graph depicting household renewable energy usage from 2000 to 2020, categorized into solar, wind, and biomass. In 2000: solar at 5%, wind at 6%, biomass at 12%. In 2004: solar at 8%, wind at 10%, biomass at 12%. In 2008: solar at 10%, wind at 13%, biomass at 15%. In 2012: solar at 13%, wind at 18%, biomass at 15%. In 2016: solar at 17%, wind at 23%, biomass at 13%. In 2020: solar at 23%, wind at 30%, biomass at 12%.

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The line chart delineates the proportion of household in a European nation using (solar,wind and biomass) for heating and electricity from 2000 to 2020.

Overall, wind is widely used as the percentage rises from the start to the end of the period while that of wind flatuated throughout the the line.

Firstly, in the year 2010 the usage of wind started at 10% then rose to about 15% in 2004 and soared to 30% in the year 2020. Morever that of solar started at the lowest point in 2000 at 5% the saw a rise dramatically to approximately 17% in 2012 followed by a slight increase to almost 20% in the year 2016 then saw an increase to approximately 25% in 2020.

Furthermore, the consumption of biomass started at the highest point of 15% at the beginning of 2000 it rise to maximum of almost 18% in 2004 then fall to about 12% by 2008 then climbed again to almost 18% in 2012 then decrease to over 10% by the year 2016 followed by an increase to about 19% in 2020

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with organization and clarity. The description of trends is not always precise, and there are some inconsistencies in the years mentioned. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the graph and organizing the information in a clearer, more logical manner. Pay attention to specific data points and use precise language to describe changes and trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the structure could be improved for better flow. The 'overall' statement is somewhat vague. The body paragraphs lack clear transitions between the different energy sources and time periods, making it difficult to follow the trends. Paragraphing needs improvement to separate the discussion of each energy source more distinctly. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and repetitive. There's reliance on phrases like 'started at,' 'rose to,' and 'saw an increase.' While the vocabulary is generally appropriate, it lacks sophistication and precision. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends and changes more effectively. For example, use synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease,' and more precise terms to describe the rate of change (e.g., 'gradual,' 'sharp,' 'steady').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Sentence structure is also quite basic, limiting the complexity of the information conveyed. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy by reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully. Vary sentence structure to create a more sophisticated and fluent writing style.

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