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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the percentage of money spent on advertising in five types of media in France from 2010 and projected spending to 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

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The image displays the percentage of money spent on advertising in France across five media types for the years 2010, 2020, 2030, and 2040. For Television, the percentages were approximately 36% (2010), 45% (2020), 40% (2030), and 37% (2040). For Newspapers, the figures were 34% (2010), 25% (2020), 15% (2030), and 10% (2040). Magazines accounted for 15% in 2010, 10% in 2020, 5% in 2030, and about 2% in 2040. Radio spending was 10% in 2010, approximately 6% in 2020, 5% in 2030, and about 4% in 2040. Internet spending was approximately 3% in 2010, 15% in 2020, 36% in 2030, and 47% in 2040.

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the line graph illustret the percentage of money spent on advertising in france in five deffirent typs of media namlly television, newspapers, magazines and radio and internet between 2010 and 2040 .

overall, it is evedint from the line graph tha the internet was the most popular type for advertising . while ,over the period newspapers is decreaseing to spent leas money on it . whereas ,using the radio and magazines followd the same patrean .

Looking at the line graph in greater detail , internt is drametacly increasing from 4%to 50% of maney to become the most popular type of media advertising to use between 2010 and 2040 . On the other hand,newspapers were decreasing to spent from 35% in 2010 to only 15% in 2040 . Using radio and magazines were the leas types of media to spent money for advertising 15% to procsematly leas than 5% of mony from 2010 to 2040 .

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

spent: 4

advertising: 4

graph: 3

money: 3

media: 3

magazines: 3

radio: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main trends of the graph, specifically the rise of internet advertising and the decline of traditional media. However, the task achievement is limited by several factors. There are inaccuracies in the data reported (for example, stating newspapers drop to 15% in 2040 when the description suggests 10%), and the overview is somewhat repetitive. To improve, ensure that all key trends are clearly identified and that comparisons between the different media types are more robust. Additionally, while this score focuses on Task Response, please be aware that frequent spelling and grammatical errors can impact the overall clarity and coherence of your report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report follows a basic structure (introduction, overview, and details), but the progression of ideas is hindered by punctuation errors and improper use of cohesive devices. For example, starting sentences with 'while' or 'whereas' followed by a comma is grammatically incorrect and disrupts the flow. To improve, ensure that transition words are used to connect ideas logically rather than just as sentence starters, and pay close attention to sentence boundaries to avoid fragments.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and contains frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'illustret', 'deffirent', 'typs', 'namlly', 'evedint', 'patrean', 'drametacly', 'maney', 'procsematly'). These errors, while sometimes understandable, occur too frequently and detract from the professional tone required for an academic report. Aim to learn the correct spelling of common academic words and use a wider variety of synonyms to describe trends, such as 'plummeted', 'surged', or 'fluctuated'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are significant grammatical issues throughout the report. There is a lack of subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the line graph illustret', 'newspapers is decreaseing'), and the use of verb tenses is inconsistent when discussing past, present, and future projections. Additionally, the phrasing 'decreasing to spent' is ungrammatical. You should focus on mastering basic sentence structures, particularly the use of the past tense for historical data and 'is projected to' for future data, to ensure clarity and accuracy.

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