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Band 6+: The map illustrates how a university center is now and how it will look after development.

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The image consists of two labeled layouts for a university sports center featuring present and future plans; present plan includes changing room on the west, 25m pool in central area, gym to the north of the pool, and outdoor courts positioned on both east and west sides with reception facing south; future plans replace the western outdoor courts with a leisure pool, and add sports hall north of gym, cafe and sports shop south to reception, with unchanged changing room on the west.

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The maps illustrate the comparisons of current university’s sport centre layout and the future illustration of the development plans.

Overall, despite some features remaining the same, The outdoor courts has transformed into some indoor facilities, with significant additions of more changing rooms and public spaces.

According to the new layout, the redeveloped sport center is going to become larger. First, the gym Is going to be built bigger and an additional several changing rooms. Besides, there is going to be a sports shop and a cafe in the reception area. Apart from that, the outdoor courts are going to be replaced by two dance studios opposite the gym and a new leisure pool on the west-side. Furthermore, a sports hall is going to appear in the university sports centre. It can be seen from the second layout that the redeveloped sports centre is going to be a fully indoor ones.

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sports: 4

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and identifies the key changes, such as the transition from outdoor to indoor facilities. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reporting; for example, the report mentions 'two dance studios' and 'additional several changing rooms,' which were not specified in the visual description. To improve, ensure that every feature mentioned is directly supported by the provided information and try to group changes more logically (e.g., by location or by type of facility) to enhance the flow of the comparison.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure, moving from an overview to specific details. However, the progression of ideas could be smoother. Some cohesive devices are used, but the transition between sentences can feel a bit abrupt. To improve, try to group related changes more effectively (e.g., grouping all additions together or all replacements together) and use a wider variety of linking words to create a more seamless flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is sufficient to convey the main ideas, but it is somewhat repetitive and lacks sophistication. For example, the phrase 'is going to be' is used very frequently. To reach a higher band, aim to use more varied synonyms for 'change' (e.g., 'remodelled', 'converted', 'expanded', 'introduced') and more precise spatial prepositions to describe the location of new facilities.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical issues that impact the professional tone of the report. There are errors in subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'The outdoor courts has transformed'), issues with noun plurality (e.g., 'a fully indoor ones'), and inconsistent capitalization (e.g., 'the gym Is'). Additionally, the sentence structure is somewhat limited, relying heavily on the 'is going to be' construction. Work on varying your sentence structures, such as using passive voice (e.g., 'A sports hall will be constructed') and complex sentences to improve accuracy and range.

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