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Band 6+: The two charts below show the percentage of mothers and fathers in part-time and full-time employment between 1997 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

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The image presents two data charts detailing employment percentages of parents with young children in England from 1997 to 2017: mothers in full-time employment begin at 20%, dipping to 17% then rising to 25% by 2017; mothers in part-time employment start at 35%, slightly increase to 37% by 2017; fathers in full-time employment remain around 85-92% throughout, peaking at 94% in 2007, then gradually decrease to 90% by 2017; fathers in part-time employment oscillate minimally between 4-8%, with initial 4% in 1997 reaching a peak of 8% in 2008-2009 then slightly decreasing to 7% by 2017.

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The two charts reveal the share of both men and women with the a youngest child aged three or four tacking full-time and part-time jobs in a period spanning from 1997 to 2017 in England.

From the overall perspective, it can be seen that women with a toddler mostly have a part-time job while men in such circumstances are full-time employed.

As the first line graph shows, the proportion of mothers with a youngest child aged under five years old working part-time stood at 39% in 1997. The number oscillated between 35% and 40% over the period but went back to 39% by the end of the period. However, the share of women taking full-time job was seemingly lower. In 1997, approximately 16% of mothers with a toddler worked in full-time jobs. The percentage steeped to 25% by 2017.

The second graph shows that in 1997 90% of fathers worked full-time. The share fluctuated slightly but remained the same at the end of the period. The percentage of fathers working part-time, on the contrary, rose over the period from 3% to 8%. Nonetheless, this share was considerably small compared to women in part-time employment.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

full-time: 5

part-time: 5

period: 5

share: 4

women: 4

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by identifying the main trends and making relevant comparisons between mothers and fathers. The overview is clear and provides a good summary of the primary distinction between the two groups. To improve, ensure more precise data reporting; for instance, there is a slight contradiction where the text states the full-time percentage for mothers 'steeped' (likely meaning stepped or increased) to 25%, but the context of the sentence structure is a bit unclear. Additionally, while the trends are captured, more attention to the specific fluctuations mentioned in the visual description would strengthen the detail of the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs that separate the data by gender. The use of cohesive devices like 'From the overall perspective', 'As the first line graph shows', and 'on the contrary' helps the reader follow the progression of ideas. To improve, ensure that the transitions between sentences within paragraphs are even smoother to avoid a slightly repetitive structure.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate for the task, using terms like 'proportion', 'oscillated', and 'share'. However, there are some awkward phrasing choices and word errors, such as 'tacking' instead of 'taking', 'steeped' instead of 'steeped/rose' (which was likely intended to be 'steeped' as in a sharp rise, but used incorrectly), and 'the a youngest child'. Aim for more precise academic collocations and ensure that word choices accurately reflect the direction of the data trends. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical inaccuracies that affect the flow, such as 'the a youngest child' and 'women taking full-time job' (missing the article 'a'). There is also a slight inconsistency in how data is described (e.g., 'the number oscillated' when referring to percentages). Focus on the correct use of articles and ensuring that subject-verb agreement and noun plurality are consistent throughout the report.

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