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Band 4+: The maps below shows a plan of a city in 1950 and at thd present.

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The image presents two maps: "City 1950 - population 20,000" and "City now - population 200,000". In 1950, the city comprised a residential area covering most of the map around two main roads intersecting at a bridge over a river, with a business district and government building near the center, and an airport in the bottom-right corner. Currently, the city’s layout has expanded significantly around two lakes, with now a larger business district, more extensive residential areas, two government buildings, a central bridge, and a new dam near the airport.

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The given map exbihit a plan of a city in 1950 and the present. The given below map compare the plan of city of 1950 with present.

Overall, the plan of a city is fully success in present time. Although a plan was done in 1950 a paln is success now. The plan was to make the city developed with well managed system and clean. In 1950 the population was 20000 only as compare with now it was very low populated city. Despite now population is 5 times the population in 1950. It also covered only certain percent by business, resident, Government building and others.

On the other hand city is fully developed and different bridges, road are constructed in city. Looking back to 1950 there was only few small bridges and city was not fully developed. Today a city plan is sucess after long hardwork and work. During 1950 population also less and only few residental were there but now population also increases and residental areas and all office are increases.

In last the city plan is sucess after a long time of hardwork. Population are increases, residental areas, airport, business, government office all others office are developed and city become more populated.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by comparing the city in 1950 and the present, but it lacks specific details from the visual information. It mentions population changes and general development, but fails to describe key features such as the expansion around two lakes, the increase in government buildings, the new dam, or the changes in the business district and residential areas. The response is repetitive and contains irrelevant commentary about the plan being 'successful' and 'hardwork,' which detracts from the task. To improve, focus on summarizing the main changes shown in the maps, using specific data and locations, and avoid subjective or off-topic statements.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear and logical structure. The introduction is repetitive and does not clearly present the main trends. The body paragraphs are not well organized, and the progression of ideas is difficult to follow. The use of cohesive devices is limited and often inaccurate, causing the text to appear disjointed. The conclusion is redundant and does not effectively summarize the key changes. To improve, use clear paragraphing with a distinct introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, and employ a range of linking words and referencing to create a smooth flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and repetitive, with frequent errors in word choice and spelling (e.g., 'exbihit', 'paln', 'sucess', 'residental'). There is little variety in the terms used to describe changes, and the language often sounds informal and imprecise. To improve, expand your range of vocabulary to include more precise and academic terms, and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Use synonyms to avoid repetition and aim for a more formal tone.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and sentence structure issues. Many sentences are incomplete or run-on, and punctuation is often incorrect. The range of grammatical structures is very limited, with frequent repetition of simple patterns. To improve, focus on writing clear, complete sentences with correct verb tenses and subject-verb agreement. Practice using a variety of complex structures, such as relative clauses and conditional sentences, and ensure proper punctuation throughout.

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