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Band 6+: You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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Dear Mr. Walker,

I recently saw a job posting for the position of Quality Assurance Manager on the university campus website posted on 23 of January and would like to apply for the same. I believe that the skills and experience I have makes me a suitable candidate for this job.

Currently, I am doing a masters course in management at the university and have already completed my bachelors in management from the same university and have been fortunate enough to be awarded with a honours degree during my bachelors. Besides that, I am also the leader of the drama club at the university itself.

Apart from that, after completing my bachelors degree I worked as an full time assistant quality manager at the croops manufacturers. The skills I gained there and the education I am getting at the university definitely makes me a perfect individual for the job.

I thank you for your consideration and would look forward to hearing from you again.

Yours sincerely,

Priya

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