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Band 7+: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to your advertisement in ABA magazine regarding a position as a childcare provider for your family for approximately six months. Allow me to explain further.

Yesterday, while reading the ABA magazine, I came across your announcement. I am currently studying at a local university in your city. As an international student, I face high tuition costs, which is why I am seeking employment to help cover my expenses. Additionally, living with an Australian family like yours would not only enhance my English language skills but also reduce my accommodation costs.

I believe I would be an excellent choice for your child because I aspire to open a daycare center in the future. In my view, children are the foundation of society, which is why I actively volunteer at kindergartens and elementary schools whenever I have free time. Furthermore, I have experience working as a children’s instructor in my home country.

I am interested in the opportunity you have advertised, and I would be grateful if you would consider my application.

I look forward to your response.

Sincerely,

Ali Rahmati

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, more detail in certain areas would strengthen the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

7

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The flow could be improved with smoother transitions between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

7

The vocabulary is appropriate and accurate. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The grammar is excellent. The letter demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures with complete accuracy.

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