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Band 5+: You have joined a new job recently. Write to your friend about your new job. In your letter • Describe the reason for quitting the previous job • Show your excitement for a new job and other details • Say about your salary package

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Dear John

I’m writting you due to an amazing reason – yesterday I got the new job !

First of all I need to describe why I quited my last company. I just tired of my boss and toxic colleagues. I was forced to work about 5 extra hours per week without any additional payment ! One day I said about this situation to my HR manager, she answered that I need to work more and that’s all. I left them the day after this.

My new job offer is fantastic ! I’ll have full-payed vacation for 3 weeks a year, a privat cabinet, and I hope that my new boss will be fair with me. Also, my department gives me a car, which I could use for business purposes.

In addition, I’ll have plus 30 percent amount of salary comparing with the last occupation. It’s about 70k CAD per year plus bonuses.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you, my friend.

Best wishes,

Kostas

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