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Band 5+: You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about what course are you doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to.

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Dear Director,

I am writing to let you know that I am very unsatisfied with my academic course, which I attended this semester. I have been eagerly interested in micro-economy before, however, while I started this course under the mentor Biros, I lost my illusion about this subject.

The teacher has informed us of information, which is out of date. He persuaded us about facts, which happened 30 years ago when the socialism government had power. In contemporary times he couldn’t support this system, which is a long time dead. Instead of this, he should teach our group how we can solve an issue in a company and look for some reliable solutions.

I would like to kindly request you to transfer my person to the macro-economy group instead. I did some research and the lector provides up-to-date information from national and international fields. Moreover, he constructs situations, which should help us in the future set on programs for managing macro.

Thank you for your understanding and for changing my studies program.

Yours faithfully,

Nicol

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Overall Band Score

5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

6

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the current course, expressing dissatisfaction, and requesting a change to a different course. However, there could be more specific details provided about the current and desired courses to strengthen the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some minor issues with transitions between paragraphs and sentence structures that could be improved for better flow.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some words are not the most precise choices. Additionally, a few awkward phrases and inaccuracies affect the overall lexical resource score. Aim for more natural and sophisticated language use.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter demonstrates a variety of sentence structures, there are some grammatical errors present, such as subject-verb agreement and preposition usage. Proofreading for these errors and ensuring accurate grammar usage will enhance the score in this criterion.

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