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Band 5+: write a letter responding to Aldora. In your letter, you should express your excitement of going to London. Then, you describe yourself. Finally, tell her how many days you will stay in that city and what you would particularly want to do and to see there

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Dear Aldora,

I am happy to receive your email. How are you? How is everything? I hope you are very well.

I also can’t wait to meet you in London at this time. We have been separated for 5 years, so I am excited that we will see each other in the upcoming months.

According to my flight ticket, the number of my flight is VN1130 which will arrive at the London airport on the 25th of October at 6PM. Please give me the contact number of 171 so that I can easily contact. At the same time. I would like to give you my phone number (901112414). Please help to inform 171 about my phone number.

Now, let me share with you about my appearance. I am a little bit fatter, and my current hair is shorter than the one when we worked in Vietnam. I have already arranged my visit plan in London for 24 days. I am planning to visit some landscapes and famous places in London. I hope you can help to introduce me to some tourist attractions.

I would also like to let you know that I hope to see you as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Duy

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

london: 4

number: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter partially addresses the task by expressing excitement about going to London and describing the writer's visit plan. However, it lacks details about the writer's interests and what they particularly want to do and see in London. It would be beneficial to include more specific information related to these aspects.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues that affect the overall flow. The transition between paragraphs could be smoother, and some ideas are not logically connected. Additionally, there are minor errors in paragraphing that could be improved for better organization.

Lexical Resource

5.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words and phrases are not used accurately or appropriately. More sophisticated and varied vocabulary related to travel and tourism could enhance the lexical resource. Additionally, pay attention to word choice and precision to convey ideas more effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. While there are some grammatical errors, they do not significantly impede understanding. Work on improving subject-verb agreement, sentence structure variety, and punctuation for better grammatical accuracy.

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