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Band 5+: A friend of yours is going on holiday and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good place that you have visited before for a holiday say where you went and where you stayed say what you can do there and what the food was like

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Dear Krishna,

I hope you’re doing well. I am writing in response to your letter suggesting you a good destination to enjoy your vacation.

I had visited Mont Tremblant which is a hill station located in Quebec. It has a beautiful landscape, especially in summer. I would recommend you travel there by car as you’ll be able to experience wonderful scenery on the way to Quebec.

I have visited the place twice and always stayed in Holiday Inn. They provide the best service, and they also upgraded our room when we visited last time. There are plenty of activities you can do there, such as hiking, river rafting, and some indoor activities like visiting a casino. The best was the night under the sky in that we slept under open sky. You can also enjoy delicious local food there. You can try different cuisines from around the world at the place. I tried sushi from the authentic Japanese restaurant there, and it was mouth licking.

Hope you enjoy there.

Keep in Touch,

Hiya

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

there: 5

enjoy: 3

visited: 3

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by recommending Mont Tremblant as a holiday destination. However, it lacks specific details about the destination, accommodation, activities, and food. It would be beneficial to provide more information to fully meet the task requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between discussing activities and food. Consider improving the flow by connecting ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

5.5

There is a reasonable range of vocabulary used, but some words and phrases could be more varied and precise. Try to incorporate more sophisticated and specific vocabulary related to travel, accommodation, activities, and cuisine to enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. There are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. Review the use of verb tenses, prepositions, and sentence structures to improve grammatical accuracy.

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Band 5+: A friend of yours is going on holiday and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good place that you have visited before for a holiday say where you went and where you stayed say what you can do there and what the food was like

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