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Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project helshe is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say how important New Year is to people in your country describe how New Year is celebrated in your country explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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Dean Tim

I’m writting to let you know the of New year celebration in my Importan8 Country.

In India the beginning of the your is Considered very important as they relate it to new beginnings of eastiothers lives and the birth of a year meas the birth of a new chapter in every individuals lives

We enjoy this amazing event by not going to bed till the clock strikes 12 am, and the moment it doet touches the mentioned deg hvery one will go crazy by Shouting e Happy newyear and by kissing Their lovers, Drenching themselves in booze, Partying like there is no tomorrow.

I Personally will go to temple near my home as I don’t Drink or Party and worship the lard for great fortune and wellbeing and the laters once the Son has the Peak, I offer food to the People in-need and get blessing from them.

That Pretly much sums everything I do for a new year event.

Best wishes,

Krishna

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The importance of New Year, how it's celebrated, and the writer's personal experience are all covered. More detail and descriptive language would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear. The flow of ideas could be improved with better transitions and paragraphing. Grammatical errors also affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impede understanding. Improved accuracy and a wider range of grammatical structures are needed.

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