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Band 5+: You have recently moved to a different city. You did not have a chance to tell your friend about the move. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: - Explain why you decided to move - Compare your new home with your previous home - Tell him/ her about the area you are now living in Begin your letter as follows: Dear…..

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Dear Anil

I hope this latter finds you well,I am writing to inform that I have moved in Ghorahi recently due to my bachelor education as well as my family also live in Ghorahi.

Actually the Ghorahi is extremely good in environment and population that Kathmandu is not good at environment and then I have to come Ghorahi be a my new degree class going on new lessons also my teacher called me in order to do good my education of degree. The house is really nice and big where I am living and then the tourist area is also available such as dhara pani,barha kune daha,ghar daura,viral roads etc.

Moreover the neighbourhoods are helping me in my room manage and buy new things that we have to meet as soon as because many visiting area is very popular in Nepal of Ghorahi if you want to visit Ghorahi , you should visit barha kune daha .

Yours faithfully, Nabaraj Budhamagar

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

ghorahi: 5

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, providing sufficient detail on the reasons for moving, comparing the old and new homes, and describing the new area. However, some aspects could be more fully developed.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improved sentence structure and clearer transitions would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but the range is limited, and some word choices could be more precise and natural. Expanding vocabulary and using more descriptive language would improve this aspect.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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